Y5 Paper 1 practice - An Open Apology

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Paper 1 practice -

"An Open Apology"

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What is a Paper 1 essay?

• A formal essay

• Focus on analysis of language and visuals

• At least 600 words

• A 5-paragraph essay (introduction, 3x body paragraph, conclusion)

• Apply analytical devices such as Big 5, visual literacy, stylistic devices, advertising techniques.

Paper 1 essay structure

• Introduction: hook, introduction, thesis statement

• BP1: Topic sentence, analysis device 1

• BP2: Topic sentence, analysis device 2

• BP3: Topic sentence, analysis device 3

• Conclusion: summary points, sweeping statement.

Let's read the text

While and after we read, try to:

• Use different-coloured highlighter pens to group your ideas.

• Ask questions of the text (who, what, when, where, why and how?)

• Underline or circle words that stand out.

• Draw lines and make links between words.

• Write 'this-means-that' notes in the margin, with arrows to key words and phrases.

Who is the audience of this article?

What is the purpose of this article (be specific!)

Take some time to think: which device is the strongest for you to use in your paper 1.

A Paper 1 thesis statement

How to structure your thesis statement:

• A + B + C = purpose of the text

Examples:

• Advertisement: The writer uses imagery, persuasive language and tone to persuade the reader to be safe and buy a Tata car instead of a motorcycle.

• Cartoon: The cartoon uses hyperbole, irony, and symbolism the criticize political corruption in the Netherlands.

• Opinion column: The author uses anaphora, rhetorical questions, and logos to argue for stronger environmental regulations.

Write down your thesis statement (including two other devices)

A + B + C = purpose of the text

Write one topic sentence (with the device that you have chosen before. Make sure it is not an empty topic sentence, such as "The advertisement uses tone". Always specify and add the purpose.

Assignment

1. Write a baby essay = introduction & body paragraph 1.

2. Use the 'An Open Apology' letter

3. Apply PIE structure.

4. You will receive feedback by asking one question.