ALS Session 5

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Academic Language SkillsHBOStudiejaar 1

This lesson contains 34 slides, with interactive quizzes and text slides.

Items in this lesson

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Objectives...
I can recognise and apply the hamburger method to a paragraph
I can paraphrase without plagiarising
I can reference accroding to the APA method

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Plan
Review homework
Work on paragraph structure
Discuss APA referencing 
Finalise and share paraphrases


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Choose the main idea of this topic sentence: Patagonia gives 1% of its profits to charities
A
Patagonia's profits have grown in the past 40 years.
B
Patagonia donates money.
C
Groups that help others are important.

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Choose the supporting sentence for this topic sentence that will NOT give the paragraph unity: Employees at companies like Pixar and Patagonia are usually satisfied.
A
For example, some of them think they deserve even better benefits.
B
These employees have many perks.
C
These companies understand how to keep employees happy.

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Choose the sentence that is most likely a topic sentence from a body paragraph of an essay.
A
There are three ways people can make a difference by changing everyday habits.
B
This essay explains how people can change their habits to make a difference.
C
One way people can change their behaviour is to cut down on the energy they use at home.

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Choose the sentence that is most likely the thesis statement of an essay
A
There are several ways people can change their behaviour to protect the environment.
B
For these reasons, people should change their behaviour.
C
People can turn off the television when they leave the house

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Choose the sentence that is most likely from the concluding paragraph of an essay.
A
People save energy by using alternative fuels and by using better lightbulbs.
B
People must change their behaviour, and this essay explained many ways of doing that.
C
Some people buy appliances with an EnergyStar label.

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What do you remember from the hamburger method?

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TASK
10-15 minutes
In pairs/small groups (no more than 4)
In and around the room
Instructions:
Two student examples, one better than the other. Look for the hamburger method in both. Make corrections to the one that needs it. Be ready to share your adjustments!

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4 types of plagiarism

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Clone = 1 
CTRL+C = 2
Find- Replace = 3
Remix= 4

Show with your fingers which method of plagiarism was applied here

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Clone = 1 
CTRL+C = 2
Find- Replace = 3
Remix= 4

Show with your fingers which method of plagiarism was applied here

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Clone = 1 
CTRL+C = 2
Find- Replace = 3
Remix= 4

Show with your fingers which method of plagiarism was applied here

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Clone = 1 
CTRL+C = 2
Find- Replace = 3
Remix= 4

Show with your fingers which method of plagiarism was applied here

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TASK 2
Take 10 minutes.
Watch the video below. You may do this outside of class if you prefer.
Finish early?
Have a look at your sources. How would you put these in APA style?

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Questions about APA/the video?

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TASK 3
Individual
5-10 minutes
Have a look at the following piece of text and source information. First, try to work out the correct way to APA reference (in text). Then, try to paraphrase the/a piece of writing, followed by the correct APA reference

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Here’s a sample answer:
In his book Mummy, James Putnam (1993) explains that Egyptians began using a natural salt on the bodies, because it helped them dry up without rotting (p. 14).

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Here’s another possibility:
To prevent the bodies from rotting, Egyptians began using a natural salt called natron to dry them (Putnam, 1993, p. 14).

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TASK 4
Individual
10 minutes
- Go back to last week's paraphrase (your own). 
- Use the plagiarism checker to check your work 
https://papersowl.com/
- Add to it/improve it. Add the correct APA in text citation. 

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What did you learn today?

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Next week
You need to have an essay topic by next week!
Make sure your Global Exam account is up and running and you are doing the work!
Homework is on BrightSpace
- watch an extended video on APA
- Finish unit 19 and 23 (outside sources and body paragraphs)

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