Essay Writing - 4

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Welcome! 

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Road map
Essay writing 
  • Peer feedback
  • Coherence


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How?
  • Planning
  • Shaping
  • Drafting
  • Revising
  • Editing/proofreading
  • Hand in

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Peer feedback
Check your partners work on the following aspects:
  • can you reconstruct their argument/framework?
  • flow - coherence 

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Framework
Introduction with your thesis statement
  • anecdote, reason you chose the topic
Body: your actual argument
  • background
  • argument in support
  • argument in support
  • refutation of opposing argument 
conclusion

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Coherence
A paragraph and its larger entity, the essay, are coherent when all its sentences/ paragraphs clearly relate to one another.

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Coherence
  • arranging details
  • transitional words/phrases/sentences
  • parallel structures
  • repeating key words and phrases

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Coherence
Napoleon certainly made a change for the worse by leaving his small kingdom of Elba. He went back to Paris and he abdicated for a second time. He fled to Rochefort in hope of escaping to America. He gave himself up to the English captain of the ship Bellerophon. He suggested that the Prince Regent grant him asylum, and he was refused. All he saw of England was the Devon coast and Plymouth Sound as he passed on to the remote island of St. Helena. He died on 5 May 1821 at the age of fifty-two. 

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Peer feedback
Check your partners work on the following aspects:
  • can you reconstruct their argument/framework?
  • flow - coherence 

Ready? Find a new topic. 
timer
10:00

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Peer feedback
  • Read the feedback 
  • Can you use it to construct a better essay?
  • Improve your weaker points
  • Hand in your essay. 
Ready? Find a new topic and repeat!

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Next week
Tuesday: Chaucer

Wednesday: Test on Chaucer

Friday: last class before spring break - a game of 30 seconds?

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