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2425 V6 essay writing: peer review essay 1 + WiP 78 + Passive voice in news articles

V4: Thu 4 February

  • check homework: exc 2-7
  • TB 4.2
  • exc 10-15
Happy Monday, V6!
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Items in this lesson

V4: Thu 4 February

  • check homework: exc 2-7
  • TB 4.2
  • exc 10-15
Happy Monday, V6!

Slide 1 - Slide

Mon 3/2 - Fri 7/2
Study objectives:
I can 
  • give and receive feedback using a peer feedback form
  • use exam vocabulary in context


 
This week's work:

    • peer review essay 1
    • 5. Academic writing: grammatical accuracy
    • Words in Progress exc 78 
    • passive voice in news articles









       







         
        Optional: 
        Rewrite your essay using peer feedback 
        hand in 2nd draft + copy received feedback on Magister (deadline Thu 23:00hrs)









           







             

            Slide 2 - Slide

            Put your printed essay on your desk

            Slide 3 - Slide

            Peer review essay 1
            Use the rubrics to review at least 2 of your classmates' essays. Consult your reader or teacher when in doubt!

            Slide 4 - Slide

            Next class: Thursday
            Optional: 
            Rewrite your essay using peer feedback 
            hand in 2nd draft + copy received feedback on Magister (deadline Thu 23:00hrs)









               







                 

                Slide 5 - Slide

                V4: Thu 4 February

                • check homework: exc 2-7
                • TB 4.2
                • exc 10-15
                Happy Thursday, V6!

                Slide 6 - Slide

                Mon 3/2 - Fri 7/2
                Study objectives:
                I can 
                • recognise a variety of passive forms
                • use exam vocabulary in context


                 
                This week's work:


                  • Passive voice in news articles
                  • 5. Academic writing: grammatical accuracy (Magister)
                  • Words in Progress exc 78 









                     







                       
                      Lesson 2

                      Slide 7 - Slide

                      Exploring the Passive Voice in News Articles
                      1. Visit the BBC News website and choose one recent news article of your interest.
                      2. Identify Passive Sentences:
                      find three to five sentences written in the passive voice.
                      3. Analyse the Use of the Passive Voice:
                      a) rephrase in active voice.
                      b) why was passive chosen?


                      4. Reflect:
                      • role of passive in news writing?
                      • effect on tone and clarity?


                      Slide 8 - Slide

                      WiP exc 78: Mixed bag  (vocab)
                      (were )compelled
                      interrogation
                      accommodated
                      fierce
                      complicity
                      essential
                      coincidence
                      pastime
                      vigorous
                      dairy
                       





                      to assert
                      to address
                      to conduct
                      elaborate
                      to disclose
                      denied
                      flamboyance
                      compassionate
                      (in) vain
                      aggravated
                      werden gedwongen
                      verhoor
                      ondergebracht
                      fel, woest
                      medeplichtigheid

                      toeval
                      tijdverdrijf
                      krachtig, energiek
                      zuivel
                      beweren
                      adresseren
                      uitvoeren
                      uitgebreid
                      onthullen
                      geweigerd

                      medelijdend
                      (hier) nutteloos
                      verergerd

                      Slide 9 - Slide

                      Homework
                      Finish this week's tasks


                        • 5. Academic writing: grammatical accuracy
                        • Words in Progress exc 78 








                           







                             
                            Optional: 
                            Rewrite your essay using peer feedback 
                            hand in 2nd draft + copy received feedback on Magister (deadline TONIGHT 23:00hrs)









                               







                                 

                                Slide 10 - Slide

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