V5A Essay feedback/practice/One Flew

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V5A Essay feedback/practice

Goals:

1. dos and don't of essay writing

2. from plan to essay

3. improve grammar/voca

4. Recap One Flew

Give synonyms for good and bad

Give synonyms for very/a lot of

Write 10 conjunctions that are common in essay writing

Write lay out of short plan to give essay proper structure/content

Do not use we/I/you in translation, hand in in next slide, 

4 mins

 Door de intense droogte hebben we de laatste jaren steeds meer bosbranden. We hebben te weinig geinvesteerd in het brandweerkorps waardoor het bestrijden van branden lastig wordt. De regering moet maatregelen treffen om in de toekomst te zorgen dat er voldoende capaciteit is.

Hand in your translation, without use of I/we etc.

Correct the following sentence: Sometimes people don't think about violence to get things the way they want it.

Improve: So violence in movies will probably cause more violence in real life because violence inspires violence

Improve: So if video games and TV caused violence you would think the world would be experience a breakout of violence.

What do you need to improve in your personal essay?

One Flew: describe the mental hospital

Questions: did you read part One?

1. Which 2 groups of patients are mentioned?

2. How are they different?

3. What had happened to Ellis?

4. When the Fog clears...explain....

5. Describe McMurphy: which group/why?

Submit answers 1-5

Harding is

1. a main character who abused his wife
2. A man who was in the Chronics department
3. an intelligent man with an illiterate wife
4. a man whose wife has left him for a neighbour

The black boys were selected by Ms Ratched because

1. they are racists and love abusing the patients
2. the clinic has a diversity policy with positive discrimination
3. they work much harder than white staff
4. they can easily be bossed around

Which patients are Acutes?

Which patients are Chronics?

1. Ruckly, Billy, Ellis
2. Chief Bromden, Ruckly, Ellis
3. Ruckly, Matterson, Ellis
4. Matterson, Bromden, Cheswick

1. Who has been on Chronics longest?
2. Bromden is not an Indian name, how come?

One Flew over the Cuckoo's Nest

What can you deduct from this image?

How does their relationship develop?

How does relationship McMurphy - Chief Bromden develop?

General questions:

1. Why did MCM end up in mental hospital?

2. Describe the Big Nurse.

3. What is Ms Ratched's estimation of MCM?

4. How are MCM and Ms R similar?

5. How does Ms R acquire her staff? 

What is the Combine?

Chief Bromden often has flashbacks. What can you tell about the imagery in this quote and what does it represent?

All those spindles reeling and wheeling and shuttles jumping around and bobbins wringing the air with string, whitewashed walls and steel-gray machines and girls in flowered skirts skipping back and forth, and the whole thing webbed with flowing white lines stringing the factory together...

"She is running like a big, accurate machine" > explain

What happens in group meetings?

How does McM describe the group meeting?

What happened to Pete Bancini?

Mention a theme discussed in the novel and illustrate with an example

What is meant by the fog-machine?

Taber had EST treatment.
Explain and what led up to it?

What is a motif and which motifs are prominent throughout the novel and what do they represent?