4V - Review writing: body paragraphs

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• Middelbare school
• havo
• Leerjaar 4

Review writing: body paragraphs

Review

Introduction

Body paragraphs

Conclusion

RECAP QUESTION 1:
What FOUR THINGS should be in your introduction?

RECAP QUESTION 2:
What FOUR THINGS should be in your conclusion?

body paragraphs 

Paragraph 1: GOOD:         reason 1 + specific example.
                                                  reason 2 + specific example

Paragraph 2: IMPROVE: suggestion + reason / explanation.

Paragraph 3: OTHER:      fun fact / advice / tip / etc..

 

Take notes!

MUSEUM REVIEW

Teenagers often think museums are boring, but we would like to prove differently. We are looking for reviews of a museum you have recently visited.

Make sure you clearly explain what was good about the museum and what they might improve to make it even more appealing for teenagers. Also mention one fun fact you learned at the museum.

We will publish your review on our blog.

Write your review in 220 - 260 words

Looking at the assignment, what will body paragraph 1 be about?

Looking at the assignment, what will body paragraph 2 be about?

Looking at the assignment, what will body paragraph 3 be about?

Paragraph 1: GOOD

Linking word + Reason 1 + Specific example

Linking word + Reason 2 + Specific example

Write the first half of body paragraph 1, in which you A) start with a nice opening linking word. B) Reason 1 (good) C) Example

Write it as a text! Leave out A) and B)

body paragraphs 

Paragraph 1: GOOD:         * reason 1 + specific example.
                                                  * reason 2 + specific example

Paragraph 2: IMPROVE: * reason 3 + specific example.

Paragraph 3: OTHER:      * fun fact / advice / tip / etc..

 

* = Linking word / phrase

Take notes!

Other good linking words to start off with

The first great thing about this museum is that ... 

The best part of ...

The most exciting / thrilling / memorable / unforgettable 

Take notes!

Write the second half of body paragraph 1, in which you A) Give reason 2 (good) and B) give another example.

Adjectives

Your text should be full of adjectives. 

Grading sheet says: 

"Special attention to adjectives, adverbs, language of description" 

Paragraph 2: IMPROVE

Linking word + Improvement Suggestion  + Reason / Explanation

Write up Paragraph 2
A) linking word
B) improvement suggestion
C) reason / explanation

Paragraph 3: OTHER

Linking word / phrase + fun fact / tip / advice

Write up Paragraph 3
A) Linking word / phrase
B Fun fact / tip / advice