Feedback essay #1/ New assignment/ CE 2023-I

Monday, September 11th
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Monday, September 11th

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Programme
- 10 minutes of silent reading
- CE 2023-I: discuss text 7
- General feedback on essay #1
- New writing assignment: focus on language
- CE 2023-I: work on texts 8 and 9

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Read your novel
timer
10:00

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CE VWO 2023-I:
Text 7
  • 14. C
  • 15. A
  • 16. Nee
  • 17. C
  • 18. C
  • 19. A
  • 20. D
  • 21. However, praising (alinea 3)

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General feedback essay #1
- Title
- 4 paragraphs
- Linking words to emphasize structure (+ commas)
- Don't forget to answer the question in the concluding paragaph!
- Mind the word limit: 220 - 260 words

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Practice essay #2
- Writing practice:
go to the 4 sample assignments on the Magister SW and pick a new writing assignment

- Focus on language and the use of the passives/ conditionals

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Focus on language
- Formal language
- No contracted forms: don't -> do not
- No 'but', 'and' or 'because' at the start of a sentence.
- Remember those linking words!
- Focus on using 2 passives and 2 conditionals in your essay and underline them.

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Writing practice
- Finish your essay in class
- Exchange your essay with your neighbour/ a classmate if there's time
- Make some final changes

- Hand in your work via Magister Opdrachten.

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CE 2023-I: Work on texts 8 and 9

Work on texts 7 and 8.

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Thursday
- Bring your novel, CE 2023-I and Literature reader to class!
- CE 2023-I: finish texts 8 + 9
- Finish essay #2

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