Answer model hints & tips-1
Learners’ explanations may include the following points:
1. the night is described as coming into the house like an unwanted visitor /
an intruder
2. alliteration / ‘dark and ‘damp’ emphasises how unpleasant the night is /
creates a gloomy mood
3. when Dustfinger appears from the ‘darkness of the yard’, it shows just
how black and mysterious the night is
4. the use of the word ‘threatening’ makes the rain sounds like an enemy /
someone coming to attack them
5. words used to describe the rain / the sound of the rain (‘rushing’, ‘falling’,
‘murmuring’, ‘loud’) makes it sound heavy / continuous / overwhelming
6. the description of Dustfing