Essay-last one

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Essay-last one

- quick recap

- looking back at essays from last lesson

- best way to go about the whole test thing

- how to add text to things on your page

- practice essay (peer)feedback time

Essay-last one

- quick recap

- looking back at essays from last lesson

- best way to go about the whole test thing

- how to add text to things on your page

- practice essay (peer)feedback time

General essay structure

• Decide on your topic

• Organize your ideas

• Write the body paragraphs

• Write the introduction

• Add the finishing touches

• Write the conclusion

• Write your thesis statement

Essay-last one

- quick recap

- looking back at essays from last lesson (and some new things)

- best way to go about the whole test thing

- how to add text to things on your page

- practice essay (peer)feedback time

three examples

Robinson Crusoe

Jekyll and Hyde

Wuthering Heights

what are your conclusions?

From your work...intro

In the 18th century it is very important that you marry the right person for the power of your family and the children you are going to have. Beauty is an important aspect for this. Beauty and money (power) say a lot about you, including Dorian Gray. 

From your work...intro

 ‘Pride and prejudice’ is a love story set in the 19th century. The book ‘Pride and prejudice’ begins with Mrs. Bennet, who wants all of her daughters to get married, the higher the status the better. Marriage is a common theme in ‘Pride and prejudice’.

From your work.... argument

The book that I chose is “Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde”, the story takes place around the end of the 19th century in a busy London. [...] The story is mainly about men in a high class of society: lawyers, doctors and chemists; all professions that require a university education. 

From your work... conclusion

In the end, Emily also gets her freedom, to a certain extend. The book makes fun of the patriarchy, and was truly an iconic feminist piece of literature. It does a good job of reflecting on the struggles of women and the many flaws of the patriarchy. 

From your work: a really good one

Jane Eyre isn’t an ordinary book. It’s not about marrying a man above your social layer. It’s the reason that you love and respect a man. 

[...] 

The man is still better than the woman. John, Jane's stepbrother, is bullying her all day long. Every day of the year. And when Jane said that to her governess she was punished. And John always gets away with what he does. 

[...]

Jane Eyre is a very different book than other 19 century books

Essay-last one

- quick recap

- looking back at essays from last lesson

- best way to go about the whole test thing

- how to add text to things on your page

- practice essay (peer)feedback time

• Decide on your topic

• Organize your ideas

• Write the body paragraphs

• Write the introduction

• Add the finishing touches

• Write the conclusion

• Write your thesis statement

structure strip

Just write a few keywords in the margin, or push a paper under the one you are writing on, but with the structure bit stricking out. 

CHECK!!!!

- structure

- content

- style

- language

Linking words and phrases:

• To express personal opinions:  In my opinion, I believe that, I feel that/ it seems to me/ in my view/ as I see it / I think/ personally.
  

• To show purpose: to / in order to / so as to / so that
• To list ideas: Firstly/secondly/ finally/ In the first place/Lastly/ In addition/ in conclusion
  
• To contrast ideas: However/ although/ in contrast/ whereas/ but/ nethertheless / in spite of / despite. 

Essay-last one

- quick recap

- looking back at essays from last lesson

- best way to go about the whole test thing

- how to add text to things on your page

- practice essay (peer)feedback time

Like this

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1 Oh no I forgot a thing

2 Oh no! I forgot another thing

Essay-last one

- quick recap

- looking back at essays from last lesson

- best way to go about the whole test thing

- how to add text to things on your page

- practice essay (peer)feedback time

practice essay (peer)feedback time

Read my comments on your work, and improve on it

No work? Make a work now!

Also: work together. Check e/o work and give feedback

You all have the rubrics (it is also in Classroom)

Look over your work- where do you think you would be? 

How can I help you?

After testweek 2 lessons?