Descriptive Writing Mastery: Planning for Success
Descriptive Writing: Plan for 40/40
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Descriptive Writing: Plan for 40/40
What do you already know about planning descriptive writing for English Language Paper 1?
Learning Objective
At the end of the lesson you will plan, structure, and craft an effective descriptive writing response for Paper 1 Section B.
What is Descriptive Writing?
Definition
Sensory detail, figurative language, setting, atmosphere.
Writing that uses vivid language to create a clear picture in the reader’s mind.
Key Features
Starter: Imagine a Place
Describe a beach using your senses. What do you see, smell, hear, feel, and taste?
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see- A Bright Blue Beautiful ocean
feel- The bristle of sand in-between my fingers
hear-waves crashing against the rocks
Taste-the Salty Sand and the sweet ocean
smell: the sweet outdoor
Success Criteria for 40/40
To get full marks you need: clear structure, strong vocabulary, varied sentences, engaging detail and accurate spelling and grammar.
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1. Opening - Start your story with an interesting main character and decide where the story is going to take place.
For example: There is a knight who lives in a peaceful village.
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2. Build up - What is going to happen in your story? Add in some problems or a mystery to solve.
For example: An evil wizard kidnaps the king.
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3. Problem - Pick what problem your main character is going to have to overcome. Maybe a dragon or an evil wizard is causing problems in the town?
For example: The wizard has a fire breathing dragon locked up guarding his lair.
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4. Resolution - How does your character deal with the problem? How will they solve it?
For example: The knight releases the dragon from his chains, giving him his freedom. In thanks the dragon assists the knight. The knight finds the king and the dragon eats the wizard!
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5. Ending - What happens to your character? You could add an unexpected twist!
For example: The dragon and knight become allies and friends and return the king back to his throne. The whole kingdom rejoices.
Understanding the Mark Scheme
Organisation, content, and technical accuracy are key. Markers look for planning, creative ideas, and clear expression.
Planning: Why is it Important?
Planning helps you structure your ideas, focus your writing, and fully answer the question.
The Planning Process
Brainstorm ideas. Use senses and keywords related to the topic.
Step 2
Step 1
Understand the prompt. Identify what you are being asked to describe.
Continuing Planning
List vocabulary and figurative language to use.
Step 4
Step 3
Organise ideas into a logical order (beginning, middle, end).
Tuesday
Starter: Quickfire Vocabulary
Come up with 5 sensory words for a forest. Share with the class.
Structure: Shaping Your Story
A clear structure guides the reader. Focus on a single moment. Use paragraphs to separate ideas.
Effective Openings
Hook the reader from the start. Use striking images or action. Example: 'The waves crashed angrily...'
Starter: Write an Opening Line
Write your own opening for a snowy morning. Share and discuss.
Using Language Features
Similes and Metaphors
Add detail and description. Example: icy, bitterly, silent.
Adjectives and Adverbs
Use to make writing vivid: 'like diamonds', 'a velvet sky'.
Building Atmosphere
Atmosphere sets the mood. Choose words to make the reader feel excitement, suspense, or calm.
Wednesday
Starter: Creating Mood
Describe a thunderstorm using words that make it scary. Share your sentences.
Paragraphs: Cohesion and Flow
Each paragraph should focus on a new detail or sense. Use connectives: then, next, finally.
Editing and Checking
Improving Sentences
Always proofread. Correct errors before completing the exam.
Spelling & Grammar
Vary your sentence starters. Check for repetition and word choice.
Practice Task: Plan & Write
Your Challenge
Choose a picture prompt. Plan and write a descriptive paragraph. Use your checklist for success.
Reflect and Improve
Share your writing with a partner. Give each other one positive comment and one suggestion.
Summary: Top Tips for 40/40
Plan carefully, use strong description, edit for accuracy, and impress with creative detail!
Thursday
we will be looking at the Freytag's pyramid in detail
Learning Objective
At the end of the lesson you will be able to identify, analyse, and use all parts of Freytag's Pyramid to create compelling stories with clear examples.
What do you already know about Freytag's Pyramid?
What is Freytag's Pyramid?
Freytag’s Pyramid is a model outlining the five key parts of a dramatic story: exposition, rising action, climax, falling action, and denouement.
The Origins
Developed by Gustav Freytag in 1863, it helps writers craft structured and engaging narratives.
Overview of the Five Stages
Stories often follow this arc: they start with background (exposition), build tension, hit a turning point (climax), and resolve conflicts.
Stage 1: Exposition
Here, we introduce characters, setting, and the main situation. Essential groundwork for understanding the story world.
Example: Exposition
'Harry Potter': Harry lives under the stairs, is mistreated, and learns about Hogwarts—a new world awaits him.
Stage 2: Rising Action
The main conflict is introduced. Tension and suspense begin to build as obstacles are presented.
Example: Rising Action
'Romeo and Juliet': The lovers meet and fall for each other despite their families’ feud, creating growing complications.
Stage 3: Climax
This is the turning point—the moment of maximum tension, where the outcome is decided.
Example: Climax
'The Lion King': Simba confronts Scar, deciding his own fate and the fate of the Pride Lands.
Stage 4: Falling Action
Consequences unfold and loose ends begin to tie up after the climax.
Example: Falling Action
'Matilda': Miss Trunchbull is defeated, school returns to normal, and characters react to the climax.
Stage 5: Denouement
Final resolution. The story reaches a satisfying end, showing what the characters’ lives look like after the conflict.
Example: Denouement
'Cinderella': She marries the prince, and her life is much improved—peace is restored.
Freytag’s Pyramid Applied
Many modern stories—from thrillers to YA fantasy—fit this structure, making them compelling and easy to follow.
Modern Novels
Films & TV
Screenwriters use Freytag’s Pyramid to keep audiences invested, by pacing conflict and resolution effectively.
Why Use Freytag's Pyramid?
It ensures your story has a clear structure, emotional highs and lows, and a strong impact on the audience.
Activity: Identify the Stages
Choose a favourite story. Pinpoint each stage of Freytag’s Pyramid in its plot.
Activity: Identify the Stages
Choose a favourite story. Pinpoint each stage of Freytag’s Pyramid in its plot.
Create Your Own Story Arc
Draft a story outline using Freytag’s Pyramid. Think about how each stage develops your plot and characters.
Friday
Task
What might you write about if the following tasks came up in an exam? Take a few minutes to think about different ways you could interpret the task, and maybe sketch a quick plan for your best idea.
The Best Day of My Life
The Mysterious Door
Never Again
Stormy Weather
Leaving
How to be a Hero
Sunday at the Beach
My Life as an Expert
Greetings from the Future
What I REALLY Learned at School
