1&2 HAVO Final Writing Lesson

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• havo
• Leerjaar 2

1&2 HAVO Writing Lesson 2: Travel Blogs

You need:

- Diary

- Laptop (closed)

- Chapter Plan

- Notebook

Classroom Behaviour

- Names +++

Classroom Behaviour

- Show each other respect.

- Listen to people who are speaking.

- Raise your hand and wait your turn to speak.

- Complete tasks on time

- Sit up.

- Tidy up.

Classroom Behaviour

Laptop= class work

Result = put it away and work on paper

Lesson Goals

By the end of the lesson, the students:

 - Know what to do for the final writing assignment.

-Understand how to use the rubric for the writing assignment.

- Can give feedback on a travel blog using the rubric.

Watch this video:

Can you find the direct translations of Dutch sayings in the video?

Wat is de letterlijke vertaling van het Nederlandse gezegde?

Write them down.

Think, Write, Share (2 min)

Write your answers.

- Why are travel blogs useful?

- What should be in a travel blog?

Writing Assignment Normandy

Step 1: Go to Peppels (1min)

Step 2: Open: Writing Assignment Normandy (1 min)

Step 3: Go through it together (5 min)

Rubric Activity

Work in groups

Step 1: Open the Rubric Year 1 & 2 file. 

Step 3: Find examples in the text that match the rubric.

Rubric Activity

Work in groups

Step 3: Find examples in paragraph 1 that match 

the first part of the rubric.

(2 min) 

Write it on the whiteboard.

Share your answers 

Step 3: Find examples in the text that match the rubric.

(10 min) 

Tip: highlight the words 

Feedback Activity (2 min) 

Work in pairs. 

Use Pepples and Padlet

Step 1: Choose one of your homework writing blogs to work on.

 Choose one: Itinerary, Top Three Things to Do in Normandy or My Trip to... 

Feedback Activity 

How to give feedback.

Tips:

Tops:

Feedback Activity 

Correct Grammar (20 points):

Tip: "Your grammar was good! You used past tense correctly."

Top: "Remember to use adjectives in the right order with nouns."

Clear Writing (25 points):

Tip: "Your words fit together well!"

Top: "Use more descriptive words to make your writing clearer and more interesting."

Feedback Activity 

Writing Rules (15 points):

Tip: "Your punctuation was great! You used periods and commas well."

Top: "Watch out for capital letters at the beginning of sentences."

Feedback Activity (10 min) 

Work in pairs. 

Use: Padlet & Word

Step 2: Give your classmate feedback on their homework(Padlet) while using the rubric. Give feedback (Word) on each part of the rubric.

Finished early: Write feedback for yourself 

Homework

Look on Peppels: Homework English Writing

Use: word/ paper

Find examples in the text that match the rubric.

Exit ticket (5 min)

- What should be in a travel blog?

- Where can you hand in your assignment?

- What do you use to create your assignment?

Exit ticket (5 min)

- What language should you have in your assignment?

- Where can you find extra help for your assignment?

Exit ticket (5 min)

- Top:

- Tip:

Lesson Goals

By the end of the lesson, the students:

 - Know what to do for the final writing assignment.

-Understand how to use the rubric for the writing assignment.

- Can give feedback on a travel blog using the rubric.