Writing focus 'Essay - Part 1' (unit 4) extra practise

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EngelsVoortgezet speciaal onderwijsLeerroute 4

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Welcome to Mrs Everstijn's (online) classroom

Slide 1 - Slide

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Materials :
  • Coursebook (p46 + 166 & 167)
  • Pen, marker & paper = notes + answers
  • laptop + MEL

Slide 2 - Slide

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Learning objectives:

  • Students can use prior knowledge on essay topic.
  • Students can use writing strategies.
  • Students can use prior knowledge on essay structures.
  • Students can typical phrases used in essay writing.
  • Students can use vocabulary linked to essay writing. 

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Introduction:

Writing: Essay - part 1
  1. Introduction = present your argument = Change question to affirmative sentence
  2. Paragraph 1 = note 1
  3. Paragraph 2 = note 2
  4. Paragraph 3 = note 3 = own idea
  5. Conclusion = answer your argument = introduction

Slide 4 - Slide

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Introduction:

Essay - Outline

  1. Introduction = keywords + linking
  2. Paragraph 1 = key words note 1 & synonyms + linking words
  3. Paragraph 2 = key words note 2 & synonyms + linking words
  4. Paragraph 3 = key words own idea & synonyms + linking words
  5. Conclusion = key words introduction & synonyms + linking words

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Example:

In your English class you have been talking about the environment and a healthy climate. Now your English teacher has asked you to write an essay.

Is it true that we help the environment when we plant a tree?
=> Argument 
  • In this essay I will argue/discuss whether or not planting a tree is helpful for the environment.
  • Nowadays the people tend to think that planting a tree is benefitial for the environment, but is it? 


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Ask after reading what's being tested? the 4 points mentioned

Explain what a prompt is.


clip of discussion exam next slide.

Introduction:

Essay - Outline

  1. Introduction = environment / tree 
  2. Paragraph 1 = clear the air (pollution, clean air, reducing CO2) + First, Firstly, 
  3. Paragraph 2 = Provide shade & hide sun, less warm, cool + Second, Secondly, Furthermore, Additionally 
  4. Paragraph 3 = deforestation, farming of wood, sustainable wood + linking words + Third, Thirdly, Additionally, Furthermore
  5. Conclusion = agree/disagree, environment, tree & beneficial, useful + In conclusion, Overall, In Summary

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Writing strategies / during:

  • Use as many words you can from the assignment.
  • Follow your outline.
  • Use synonyms, descriptions if you do not remember the word.
  • Avoid repetition.
  • Use linkers and referencing.

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Writing strategies / after:


  • Read your essay, change any sentences that do not run properly.
  • Check if you have included all aspects of the assignment.
  • Check capitals and spelling.
  • Check for repetition => change if necessary.

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Example:

In your English class you have been talking about the old people and society. Now your English teacher has asked you to write an essay.

Around the world, people are living and staying healthy for longer and longer. What changes does this bring to today's society? Are these changes good or bad?

Notes: 
  1. Caring for the elderly
  2. Jobs
  3. own idea


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Ask after reading what's being tested? the 4 points mentioned

Explain what a prompt is.


clip of discussion exam next slide.

What have you learned today?

Slide 11 - Open question

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What needs more instruction or practice?

Slide 12 - Open question

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Extra assignment:
Watch a music video of a famous singer/band who  perform as a street artist. Comment on the performance, include reasons.

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