Paper 1 Year 5 - I have the nicest husband -

Paper 1 Year 5
I have the nicest husband
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Paper 1 Year 5
I have the nicest husband

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What is a Paper 1 essay?
  • A formal essay
  • Focus on analysis of language (incl. visuals)
  • 600 - 700 words
  • A 5-paragraph essay (Introduction, 3x body paragraph, conclusion)
  • Apply analytical devices such as the Big 5, visual literacy, advertising techniques, stylistic and rhetorical devices 

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Who is the audience of this advertisement?

Slide 4 - Open question

What is the purpose of this advertisement? (Yes, it is to sell, but be more specific than that)

Slide 5 - Open question

Take some time to think. Which device is the strongest for you to use?
Name one. Name the example (shortly) too.

Slide 6 - Open question

*NEW* The effect on the audience
Every writer (artist) makes decisions that have an effect on the audience. In marketing - every choice is for a reason. It is to sell indeed. So, the devices that you have written down: what is the effect on the audience that the advert says "I have the nicest husband". This is both dominant reading (possibly) AND it uses specific diction (in this case a superlative), namely 'the nicest husband'. Every woman wants that (sort of..).

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What is the effect of your device?

Slide 8 - Open question

Thesis statement
One way to make a good thesis statement is to use specific verbs to reveal the author's purpose.
Thesis Statement

One way to make a good thesis statement is to use specific verbs to reveal the author's purpose.

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Write down your thesis statement (incl. two other devices).

Slide 10 - Open question

Write one topic sentence (with the device that you have chosen before). Important - make sure it is not an empty topic sentence, such as "The advertissement uses diction". Always specify and add the purpose.

Slide 11 - Open question

*NEW* Structure
From PIE to PEEL

The structure of a body parapgraph is from now on (also) PEEL:
P = Point (the topic sentence / the argument)
E = Examples from the text
E = Explanation (analysis of the example
L = Link to the Thesis statement

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Assignment
  • Write part of a Paper 1 essay: introduction, 1 body paragraph 
  • Use the 'I have the nicest husband' advertisement
  •  Deadline = Friday 20 October 22:00
  • You will receive feedback 

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