23.2 writing

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• vmbo g
• Leerjaar 3,4

Goals and planning

At the end of today you will be able to: Make sentences in the right order & 

 write an email about a place you have been and where you would like to go 

Introduction 3 min

Group in 2(grammar and writing prep): 10 min 

short presentation: 5 min

Writing: 15 min

Feedback: 5 min

Wrap up: 5 min

Write down a descriptive word on the picture you just saw.

Write down a descriptive word on the picture you just saw.

Group 1: 

What: Make a checklist for writing

How:Make a list of what has to be in the email to Joe

Time: 10 min

Help: with the three of you

Result: present to rest of class (they are writing the email

Finished: Think of a challenging extra for the email

*You will get extra info in chat 

Group 2:

What: Word Order (on request)

How: Grammar 

Time: 10 min

Help: Not necessary

Result: You will see in the email

Email from Joe

Hey cous', 

How are you? Thanks for writing me earlier because I now have a good idea of your life the last couple of months. My life was very much put on hold the last couple of months which made me very sad, but thanks for asking. 

It's becoming a bit better now but here in Australia it is becoming Winter. Isn't it turning to Summer in  Europe? Awesome! You must be really looking forward to the Summer break. Can you describe a place where you went last summer and how did you feel about that? And where are you going this summer? Could you describe the scenery? How do you guess you'll feel about it? 

Cheerio,

Joe

Presentation

Tell us what has to be in  the letter

Send it in the chat for everyone to see and tell us.

Work time 

What: Write a short email back to Joe

How: Use what the experts say has to be in there (can you do the hard part?)

Time: 15 min

Help: BBB (Book, Buddy, Best teacher in the world)

Result: Will be checked with peer feedback

Finished: https://dotstorming.com/b/5eb273dd0ed23e069b2cba87

Peer feedback

Look at at least 2 other emails and comment:

Was everything the experts said in there and is it clear?

 What could the writer add to improve? 

What do you take away from this writing?

Remember the goals?

At the end of today you will be able to: Make sentences in the right order &

 write an email about a place you have been and where you would like to go

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