V5 week 11

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EngelsMiddelbare schoolvwoLeerjaar 5

This lesson contains 35 slides, with interactive quizzes and text slides.

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Get out your books
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During this lesson
- Sonnets

- Sir Thomas Wyatt

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iambic pentameter
But soft! What light through yon-der win-dow breaks?
It is the East and Ju-liet is the sun!
A-rise fair sun and kill the en-vious moon,
Who is al-rea-dy sick and pale with grief
That though her maid art far more fair than she

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Whoso list to hunt, I know where is an hind,
But as for me, hélas, I may no more.
The vain travail hath wearied me so sore,
I am of them that farthest cometh behind.
Yet may I by no means my wearied mind
Draw from the deer, but as she fleeth afore
Fainting I follow. I leave off therefore,
Sithens in a net I seek to hold the wind.
Who list her hunt, I put him out of doubt,
As well as I may spend his time in vain.
And graven with diamonds in letters plain
There is written, her fair neck round about:
Noli me tangere, for Caesar's I am,
And wild for to hold, though I seem tame.

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Whoso list to hunt, I know where is an hind,
But as for me, hélas, I may no more.
The vain travail hath wearied me so sore,
I am of them that farthest cometh behind.
Yet may I by no means my wearied mind
Draw from the deer, but as she fleeth afore
Fainting I follow. I leave off therefore,
Sithens in a net I seek to hold the wind.
Who list her hunt, I put him out of doubt,
As well as I may spend his time in vain.
And graven with diamonds in letters plain
There is written, her fair neck round about:
Noli me tangere, for Caesar's I am,
And wild for to hold, though I seem tame.
abba abba cddc ee
  

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to whom is the poem addressed?

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what does the poet invite them to do?

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For whom is the hind a metaphor?

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Get out your books
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During this lesson
- recap formal writing style

- homework check

- gimkit?

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Formal writing

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formal writing
1. Avoid slang, everyday language, and contractions

2. Use an appropriate greeting and sign off

3. Formal writing is less emotional/personal

4. Formal sentences are usually longer than informal sentences

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Homework
You need some time off from work for a wedding.

Write a formal e-mail to your boss requesting this time off.

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some tips
- State the dates of your absence clearly.

- Give clear reasons why you need the time off, but don't go into too much unnecessary detail.

- Assure your boss that your work can be covered.

- End by thanking your boss for considering your request.

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Help each other
  • discuss your e-mail with someone in class/online; 
  • are there things you can improve?

  • combining your ideas to write the perfect e-mail

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Dear Ms Jensen,

I'm writing to request some time off between Thursday 18 March and Friday 25 March in order to attend my brother's wedding in Switzerland.

(I understand that the week I am requesting exceeds my remaining annual leave by. I would like to ask if those days may be taken in lieu of the extra working hours I put in during the two weekends of the Chicago International Management Conference last November.)

I have spoken to Kristian Sander and Jasmine Riber, who have both agreed to cover for me during my absence. I would also distribute a playbook for my team members so that everyone is clear on the tasks they are in charge of and the deadlines they have to meet. During my leave, I would be fully reachable by phone and email to answer any questions or provide any assistance needed, except for Monday 22 March from 13.00 to 15.00. I would also be happy to discuss any further plans to ensure my workload is covered.

Please let me know if you need any additional information. Thank you for your consideration of my request.

Best regards,
..........






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Get out your books
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During this lesson
- How do we say that in a formal letter?

- gimkit

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to get

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I tried ...., but it did not work

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sorry

Slide 23 - Open question

Talk about

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ask for

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Your questions about formal language

Slide 26 - Open question

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Get out your books
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final questions formal writing

Slide 29 - Open question

Formal greetings

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needs

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get in touch with

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to put off

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to help

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I will sue you

Slide 35 - Open question