WK 24 Tuesday 8.30: writing practice (email)

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time-iconLesson duration is: 45 min

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Welcome!

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Bring
lined paper

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Finished by today
Red
Explorers
Unit 6
White
Breakthrough A1
Unit 3
Blue
Breakthrough A1
Unit 7/8
Orange
B1-A2
75%
50%
Ruihu
75%
Ahmed
Olexsandra
Rayna
Lin
Mohanad
75%
Violeta
Kerime
Kamelia
Milena - Unit 8

Unit 5:
Eirini
Mohamed 

Unit 3:
Kyle
Goodluck

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Seating plan
As arranged by your mentor
Check!
On your desk: a pen

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Lesson goal

I can write an informal mail in English, using the correct conventions.

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Road map
  • Warm-up
  • Instructions
  • Writing task
  • Peer feedback
  • Review


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Warm-up
What are the components (parts) of an email?
Discuss with your neighbour.
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1:00

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Aanhef
Hi, Hello, Hey, Dear [name]

Beantwoord vragen
I hope you are well. I am fine/okay. How are you?
Thanks for your email. It was good to hear from you. 

Vertel meer over het onderwerp
Something bad happened! I have broken my leg and cannot walk. It doesn't hurt as much as before. They put a cast on my leg, so I cannot move a lot. etc....

Afsluitende  zin
Write back soon!  Keep in touch. See you soon. 
Give my regards to your family. 
I hope to hear from you soon.  etc. 

Afsluiting en ondertekening
All the best, Take care, Talk later, See you! Best wishes, Have a good weekend,  Love, Hugs and kisses, 
[name]

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Spoken language
Avoid:
gonna                 going to
wanna                want to (or: would like to)
u                            you

Also, I (=ik) is always written with a capital letter

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Components of an email
  • Onderwerp = subject
  • De aanhef = greeting (salutation)
  • De openingszin = opening sentence
  • De afsluiting = closing
  • Ondertekening = signature

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Task
  • Write an informal email, on paper
  • Work individually
  • After 20 minutes: peer feedback (different colour pen)
  • Next lesson: feedback from me

Done? Study for the SO (Quizlet/word list)

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Write an informal email (on paper)
Write 80-100 words, individually
Topics:
Red
White
Blue
Orange
Write an email to a friend about your daily activities. What time do you get up and go to school, how you get to school, what time you finish and get home?
Write to an old friend about your favourite sport. Do you play it? How do you play it? What do you need to play the sport? Why do you like it? Who do you play with?
Write to a friend in your home country about what your school day looks like (subjects, time to start and finish, activities)
Write to a friend about your school and the school system in The Netherlands
Finished? Study the vocab
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20:00

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Peer feedback
Read your neighbour's email:
  • Check: did they use the right conventions, did they write what was asked for, do you understand the sentences?
  • Use a different colour pen
  • Give one tip (what could be better)
  • Give one top (what went well)

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Review

I can write an email in English, using the correct conventions.

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Finished by next Wednesday, June 18th
Red
Explorers
Unit 6
White
Breakthrough A1
Unit 3
Blue
Breakthrough A1
Unit 7/8
Orange
B1-A2
100%
100%
Ruihu
100%
Ahmed
Olexsandra
Rayna
Lin
Mohanad
100%
Violeta
Kerime
Kamelia
Milena - Unit 8

Unit 5:
Eirini
Mohamed 

Unit 3:
Kyle
Goodluck

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Looking ahead
SO
Feedback on email
Holmwoods, with individual help

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