H4 P3 W7 feedback letters

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• havo
• Leerjaar 4

Basic rules

• We do our work when we should
• We are silent during explanations and raise our hands for questions
• Our phone is in our "zakkie" in our bag
• We don't eat, drink, or chew gum in class

learning goals

I can write an informal letter to a friend

feedback letters

I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to express how thankful I am that you've agreed to help me out. Your support means a lot to me.

Here are the instructions for the tasks:

Please review the document I sent and provide feedback by the end of the week.

Could you also research alternative solutions to the problem we discussed and share your findings with me by next Tuesday?

Finally, could you please confirm your availability for a quick meeting next Thursday to discuss our next steps?

Please refrain from making any major changes without telling me first and avoid sharing sensitive information outside our trust circle because it is very important.

I hope you're well! I just wanted to send you a quick note to express my immense gratitude for your willingness to help me. Your support means the world to me!

Here are a few things to get started:

Could you please review the draft I sent you and give your opinion before the end of the week?

If you have some spare time, could you brainstorm some ideas for our project?

It would also be great if you could help gather information about potential suppliers.

Just a friendly reminder:

Let's avoid making major changes without discussing them first.

And keep all sensitive information confidential.

• I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to express how thankful I am that you've agreed to help me out. Your support means a lot to me.
• I hope you're well! I just wanted to send you a quick note to express my immense gratitude for your willingness to help me. Your support means the world to me!
• I just wanted to drop you a quick note to say thank you for helping me.
  
• Your support means a lot to me!
• Just a quick note to say a huge thanks for agreeing to help me out. It means a lot!
• I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to express how thankful I am that you've agreed to help me out. Your support means a lot to me.
• I hope you do a great job! I just wanted to send you a quick note to say thank you so much for agreeing to help - it really means the world to me!
• I hope you're doing great! I just wanted to say a big thank you for agreeing to help me out. It means a lot to me, really.

• avoid sharing sensitive information outside our trust circle.
• And keep all sensitive information confidential.
• Keep the document private until we're done.
• Keep things hush-hush, especially sensitive info. 
• avoid sharing sensitive information outside our trust circle.
• And let's keep this between us for now, okay?
• . And please, keep the document just between us.

I just wanted to drop you a quick note to say thank you for helping me.

Your support means a lot to me!

Here's what I need from you:

Could you please take a moment to review the document I sent over and tell me what you think by Friday? Following that can you look over the spreadsheet for mistakes or missing stuff? And could you let me know when you'll finish these?

Remember:

Avoid making big changes without consulting me.

Keep the document private until we're done.

Does this work for you? Let me know if you need anything.

Thanks once again for your support! 

Just a quick note to say a huge thanks for agreeing to help me out. It means a lot!

Could you review the document I sent and share your thoughts by Friday? 

Any ideas for our project would be awesome!

If you have time, could you look into potential vendors?

Remember, Let's discuss any big changes before making them.

Keep things hush-hush, especially sensitive info. Anyways, How are you? How's life treating you? 

I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to express how thankful I am that you've agreed to help me out. Your support means a lot to me.

Here are the instructions for the tasks:

Please review the document I sent and provide feedback by the end of the week.

Could you also research alternative solutions to the problem we discussed and share your findings with me by next Tuesday?

Finally, could you please confirm your availability for a quick meeting next Thursday to discuss our next steps?

Please refrain from making any major changes without telling me first and avoid sharing sensitive information outside our trust circle because it is very important.

I hope you do a great job! I just wanted to send you a quick note to say thank you so much for agreeing to help - it really means the world to me!

So, here's the scoop and some pointers:

Could you please take a look at the attached document and share your thoughts by Friday?

Once you have everything arranged, can you help spread the word among our friends?

Let's plan a quiet break after we're done, it's a pleasure!

Oh, and a little heads up:

Please don't make any major changes without alerting me.

And let's keep this between us for now, okay?

Catch you soon! By the way, what does your week look like?

I hope you're doing great! I just wanted to say a big thank you for agreeing to help me out. It means a lot to me, really.

Here are some things I need you to do:

1. Could you please take a look at the document I sent and share your thoughts by Friday?

2. It would be awesome if you could brainstorm a few ideas for our project meeting next week.

3. Let's schedule a quick chat sometime next week to talk about any questions you might have.

Two things to remember:

1. Please don't make any big changes without checking with me first.

2. And please, keep the document just between us.

Can you let me know when you're free for our chat next week? 

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REMINDER

The deadline for your PO is coming Sunday 23.59.

Handing it in late will lead to point deduction.

(not handing it in at all will result in a 1)