Rose Blanche: Writing with Empathy
Rose Blanche: Writing with Empathy
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Rose Blanche: Writing with Empathy
What do you already know about diary entries?
Learning Objective
At the end of the lesson you will be able to write a second draft of a diary entry from Rose Blanche’s perspective, describing what she saw and heard, improving emotional depth and cohesion.
What Is a Diary Entry?
A diary entry is a personal record of what someone saw, heard, and felt. It shows the writer’s thoughts and emotions as events happen.
Rose Finds the Camp
Describe what Rose saw when she reached the camp. What sounds and sights might she notice? How would these make her feel?
Adding Emotional Depth
Use words to express Rose’s feelings: surprise, sadness, worry, or hope. Think about how she reacts to what she sees.
Using Cohesive Devices
Why Use Them?
Examples
Then, next, suddenly, because, although, as a result, in addition.
Cohesive devices help link your ideas so the diary entry flows smoothly and is easy to read.
Reflecting on Rose’s Thoughts
What did Rose learn or question after seeing the camp? How might her view of the world change?
Your Task: Second Draft
Use what you have learned to write a second draft diary entry from Rose’s perspective. Remember to include detailed descriptions, emotions, and connect your ideas clearly.
Reflect and Share
How did you improve your diary entry? Share one thing you changed to create more emotional depth or cohesion.
Write down 3 things you learned in this lesson.
Write down 2 things you want to know more about.
Ask 1 question about something you haven't quite understood yet.
