Show don't tell
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4.1.1 SENSORY WORDS:
"While he walked out of the pub he noticed a sharp feeling inside his stomach. He realised it might be the fish 'n chips he'd eaten - it hadn't tasted right."
"While he walked out of the pub he noticed a sharp feeling inside his stomach. He realised it might be the fish 'n chips he'd eaten - it hadn't tasted right."
Slide 3 - Open vraag
4.1.2 MAKE EMOTIONS FELT:
"The fish 'n chips he'd had, hadn't tasted right. While he walked out of the pub hisstomach ached."
"The fish 'n chips he'd had, hadn't tasted right. While he walked out of the pub hisstomach ached."
Slide 4 - Open vraag
4.1.3 DESCRIBE BODY LANGUAGE:
"It was clear that Janet didn't believe the excuses her husband was making."
"It was clear that Janet didn't believe the excuses her husband was making."
Slide 5 - Open vraag
4.1.4 CHOOSE YOUR WORDS CAREFULLY:
"He used to be an unkind boy, who liked annoying his peers and treating them badly."
"He used to be an unkind boy, who liked annoying his peers and treating them badly."
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4.2 BREATHE LIFE INTO YOUR CHARACTERS:
Rewrite (part of) the conversation between Lenny and Curley's wife!
Rewrite (part of) the conversation between Lenny and Curley's wife!
