Sept 21 - P1 - 3V

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• havo, vwo
• Leerjaar 1

To do:

• Find a seat
• Take off your coat, take off your hats and head phone/earbuds
•  Chewing gum  in the trashcan
• Phone in the bag 
• only notebook + pens on table

Assignment:

grab your namesign and put it in front of you 

Describe the appearance of 1 of these people (think clothing, looks, etc.)

 Use min. 2, max. 4 sentences.
> ON YOUR OWN! 
> write it in your notebook 

Goals for today

I can give peer feedback

I know what goals I need to work on in order to improve my skills and knowledge regarding writing an email

Programme

Warming-up

Checking some answers

Peer feedback

DIY: rewrite your email

Test: Writing I

 Thursday, 12th of Oct. (?)

Goal: Writing an email 

to a penpal

Feedback:

- Specifiek 

- Wat kan verbeterd worden 

(en vooral hoe)

- Wees aardig

Tip:

'highlight' wat fout is en zet in diezelfde kleur je feedback

3 rounds of feedback

4 minutes per round

1 subject per round 

(spelling, grammar and use of capital letters)

Step 1: Copy + paste (kopieer en plak) je tekst op een volgende pagina in je document > hier gaat je partner feedback op geven
Degene die feedback geeft; zet je naam in het document

Round 1: Conventions

Focus: 
Greeting, paragraphs (1 subject

per paragraph), sign-off

 

Round 2: Complete?

Focus: 

Does it meet the requirements from the writing task as described in 1E + is it between 200 - 250 wordds?

 

Round 3: Spelling

> Leestekens;

. . : ! ?

> correctly spelled?  
Not sure, check a dictionary 

+ your Insight book 

Round 3: Grammar

Focus: Present Simple 

+ Present continuous

 

DIY: rewrite the email

1 document, 2 pages:

1 original version

1 version with feedback

Now:

a 3rd page with a rewritten version

(homework)

For Mon. 25th:

upload 1 document with these 3 pages on Its Learning: 

Nearing the end...

A final check

Done? Hand it back to your teacher

Homework:

Submit your rewritten (herschreven) email into the dropbox thingie in the planner. The document contains:

Page 1: original version

Page 2: copy + feedback

Page 3: rewritten version

Study words 1 - 30 (see wordlist file in planner)