Essay structure
International Exam Practice
28.02 - building a strong written and spoken argument
Items in this lesson
International Exam Practice
28.02 - building a strong written and spoken argument
How do these images relate to writing or speaking? Which aspects do they represent?
Band 6 - B2 level
Band 7 and higher - C1
Analysis and comparison
A. Remote learning is often considered a beneficial alternative to traditional education. Students are able to manage their schedules more independently and participate in classes from any location. This format may also contribute to a more comfortable learning environment. However, despite these advantages, certain challenges inevitably arise, particularly in relation to reduced social interaction. For this reason, remote learning can be seen as a double-edged sword.
B. One of the most significant advantages of remote learning lies in its flexibility. Unlike traditional classroom settings, online formats allow students to organise their schedules around personal and professional commitments. For instance, learners who combine studies with part-time employment can access recorded lectures at their convenience, thereby avoiding the constraints of fixed timetables. As a result, remote learning can foster greater autonomy and time-management skills.
Which version is academically stronger?
A
B
A typical mistake even band 7 and higher (C1+) make
Poor paragraph structure, too many underdeveloped arguments, no paragraph progression
Analysis
Building a strong written and spoken argument
Example!
