Peer feedback - short stories choice

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• mavo
• Leerjaar 3

Peer feedback

Writing

4HAVO reg

November 2024

Today

• What is peer feedback?
• How to give peer feedback.
• Giving peer feedback in class on the review

• Short stories to choose from

What is peer feedback?

Peer feedback 

Why?

How?

Take notes to answer these questions during the next video

Spark: content of good feedback

• Specific  Link your feedback to a specific part of the review.
• Prescriptive  Offer a solution to the problem you find.
• Actionable  When the feedback is read, the writer should know how to improve.
• References  The feedback has to do with the criteria you see in the checklist
• Kind  Don't be mean, be critical and helpful

Time to give feedback

• Share your work with your neighbour.
• 10 minutes to read the essay and write feedback.
• Go down the checklist.
• Give two tops and tips.

Steps: Feedback on opinion writing

Step 1. Check the content of the Essay on the criteria as marked in your reader

Step 2. Use the checklist to give feedback

Checklist for peer feedback

1. Structure: Title/Introduction/3 body paragraphs/conclusion
2. Clear Thesis Statement
3. PEE in each Body Paragraph
4. Language is formal

Remember: don't just tick yes or no but identify where it is in the Opinion Essay and what can be improved?