Peer feedback - short stories choice

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• mavo
• Leerjaar 3

Peer feedback

Writing

4HAVO reg

November 2025

Today

• What is peer feedback?
• How to give peer feedback.
• Giving peer feedback in class on the application letter

What is peer feedback?

Peer feedback 

Why?

How?

Take notes to answer these questions during the next video

Spark: content of good feedback

• Specific  Link your feedback to a specific part of the review.
• Prescriptive  Offer a solution to the problem you find.
• Actionable  When the feedback is read, the writer should know how to improve.
• References  The feedback has to do with the criteria you see in the checklist
• Kind  Don't be mean, be critical and helpful

Sample 1

Dear Caroline Robinson My name is John and I would like to know some more about the job of testing the gear your company sells as an certified tester. There are project that are one day and two days long. Could you also provide me with more details about the "wide range of projects and locations"? I would be gratefull to hear your reply. Thank you so very much, And I'm waiting for your mail.

Sample 2

Dear Mrs Robinson,

I am writing this email about the apliction advert of the volunteer.

First of all do you maybe know if there are longer projects then the one and two days project? Secondly could you maybe add some more details about the project and the location? When we have a lunch break is the lunch provided by the company or should i bring my own? After all are there anyother cost besides the admin fee? 

I would like to see a reaction.

Yours sincerely, 

Change the following sentences/words

I write you this e-mail

At first

ansers

Can you tell me more

What means the highly experienced group leaders

i am interested in 

immiditly

Time to give feedback

• Share your work with your neighbour.
• 10 minutes to read the letter and write feedback.
• Go down the checklist.
• Give two tops and tips.

Steps: Feedback on writing

Step 1. Check the content of the Application on the criteria as marked in the study guide (Teams)

Step 2. Use the checklist to give feedback

Checklist for peer feedback

1. Did they follow the correct structure?
   
2. Is the language formal and polite?
   
3. Are there specific details and examples?
   
4. Are there any grammar or spelling mistakes?

Remember: don't just tick yes or no but identify where it is in the letter and what can be improved?

Another example

Schrijfopdracht Instructie: Sollicitatiebrief voor Stage als Vocal Zangeres

Doel van de opdracht:

Je gaat een sollicitatiebrief schrijven voor een stage als vocal zangeres bij Olivia Rodrigo. In deze brief moet je jezelf voorstellen, uitleggen waarom jij geschikt bent voor de stage, en waarom je enthousiast bent om met deze artiest samen te werken. Je zult leren hoe je een professionele sollicitatiebrief schrijft, met de juiste toon, structuur en overtuigingskracht.

Opdrachtomschrijving:

Doelgroep en Context:

Stel je voor dat je solliciteert voor een stage als vocal zangeres bij Olivia Rodrigo, of een andere artiest die je bewondert. Deze artiest is een bekende naam in de muziekwereld, en je wilt indruk maken door een professionele en goed geschreven sollicitatiebrief.