essay-(peer)feedback

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• Middelbare school
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• Leerjaar 4

essay-(peer)feedback

Today: 

- quick recap

- look at own practice essays

- look at essays from last year

- what are we looking for in an essay and why?

- if time left: portfolio

Who submitted a practice essay?

yes

no

ChatGPT did it

(I knew the answer)

Well done to those who submitted. Seriously well done!

And I am sure you know what I am going to say to those who did not

Argumentative essay?

If you wrote your essay

Look at my feedback

See what you can improve

Look at your neighbour's work, see what they are up to 

- can you help?

- can you learn?

If you did not write an essay

DO NOW

Look at the neighbour's work, see what they are up to 

- can you help?

- can you learn?

The rubric: 4 items. What do you think we are looking for? 

• Level of content and development of arguments
• Grammar and vocabulary
• Style and organization
• Format

Now sit in groups of 4

you get three essays (student work from last year)

you get three rubrics

you get this task: 

                                    Rank G-V-O

                                    Explain why/discuss---> write and underline!

                                    Use the rubric to guide you

                                    I will ask one of you to speak for the group

Let's discuss

- what did you think?

- tips

- tops

- would this be a pass or not? Why?

Last bit of lesson

CHOICE

- work on your dossier

- read your book

- revisit your essay

Before you go

Thumbs up, down, half: confident about the essay? 

Next Friday last class: 

Anything you want me to revisit? Explain? Talk about books? Practice using quotes? Practice analysis? Read beautiful poetry to you?

Don't forget to PRINT your dossier