Cuc 3 14-2-2022

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• vwo
• Leerjaar 3

CUC 3

Writing feedback

7-2-2022

Planning

• Welcome
• recap
• Feedback assignment
•  Next lesson 
• Homework

Recap

Point

Argument

significance

Conclusion

Goals

• After this lesson I am able to analyse, evaluate and revise my own text and the text of others.
• After this lesson I understand how to revise my text and rewrite it. (I can look at my essay and see what I did wrong before I hand it in) 

Feedback assignment

• Give your essay to your neighbour
  
• Write down the numbers
• Look at the essay
• Answer the questions
• Look at the following questions and provide feedback (kindly) 

Content

1. Is all the required key information  covered  by the task?

2. Is the information relevant to the task?

3. Are the basic points developed with their own ideas?

Communicative Achievement

1. Is the main purpose(s) of the text  achieved(for example, explaining, persuading, suggesting,

apologising, comparing, etc.)?

2. Is there a balance of straightforward and more complex ideas?

3. Is a suitable style and register(formal or informal) used  for the task?

Organisation

1. Are paragraphs used to organise ideas?

2. Are organisational features use for the genre of the text (for example, titles,

headings, openings, closings, etc.)?

3. Is the connection between ideas clear and easy for the reader to follow? (Linking words)

Language

1. Is there a wide range of vocabulary?

2. Are the same words and phrases repeated often?

3. Is a range of simple and more complex grammatical structures used?

4. Is the use of grammar accurate?

5. Is the spelling accurate?

Feedback Assignment

Look at the feedback that you've received

Hand in your essay 

Discussion

Page 84

If there is time: Reading and use part 7

Next lesson

Celebrities 

Discussion

Writing

Homework

Reading unit 8, page 84/85. : ex 2 and 3

Vocabulary unit 8, page 86/87 : ex. 1,2,3,5,6