Unit 1: Feedback on your review

• English
• Middelbare school
• vwo
• Leerjaar 2

Review of the  Review !

Exam Task

Plan

• Please use the Review check list to evaluate your partner's review.
• Hand back in to Mrs Corrigan along with your review 

Feedback on Review writing

CONTENT	ORGANISATION
COMMUNICATIVE ACHIEVEMENT	LANGUAGE

Mainly done well

LAYOUT: 

Introduction

Description

Discussion

Recommendation

Mainly done well

LAYOUT: 

Introduction

Description

Discussion

Recommendation

Mainly done well

Interesting title to catch the reader's attention

Correct tone: Friendly and chatty. Use of shortened forms: Couldn't / Shouldn't / We've / I'd / They'd

Spelling Bloopers

Realy 

Awfull

helpfull

exiting

Grammar Bloopers

• Not enough use of the Past tense, especially the Present Perfect.
• Too much repetition of words like fun, nice , good
• It was very fun 
• Small i instead of I for first person (Ik)
• Write numbers under ten out in full. 

Needs attention

Write a very clear plan before you start writing your review...

You wouldn't set off on a journey to a new place without (Google) maps!

Useful language for a Review

Now: 

Copy the useful language from page 168 in to your notebook