Apr 8th- 3V - P3

To do:
  • insight + notebook  on the table
  • Air pods/head phones/etc + phone in the bag


Assignment:
How many linking words can you use to (write them down!) :
- add some info (addition)
- contrast things 
- provide a reasoning/argument 
timer
3:00
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EngelsMiddelbare schoolhavo, vwoLeerjaar 2

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To do:
  • insight + notebook  on the table
  • Air pods/head phones/etc + phone in the bag


Assignment:
How many linking words can you use to (write them down!) :
- add some info (addition)
- contrast things 
- provide a reasoning/argument 
timer
3:00

Slide 1 - Tekstslide

Goals
I can write a (formal) letter to a newspaper



Important: change of test date
Thur. 28th of April

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Linking words
- add some info (addition)
- contrast things
- provide a reasoning/argument

How many can we find?

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Programme

Peer feedback writing task
Leerdoelen obv de tasks

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Who finished writing the letter?

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Peer feedback time!
Step 1: copy your essay on a new page (within the same document)
Step 2: swap laptops with a partner
Step 3: partner adds name on this 2nd page + uses a different colour for feedback, tips, etc.
Step 3: Be critical but good peer!

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Peer feedback
Round 1: structure

Are there paragraphs and also the necessary number of paragraphs (about  5)
(leuke extra:word count: 250 - 300 words
timer
2:30

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Peer feedback
Round 2: opinion + support
Is it clear what the person's opinion is
does the person use a correct organization:
> opinion (main point or argument + reasoning)
> understanding of problem and cause
+
suggestions and results (and in the proper paragraphs)
timer
4:00

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Peer feedback
Round 3: Formal writing
1. Contractions (don't, isn't, etc.)
2. Lots of pers. pronouns (pers vnw) like I, she, we, they, etc.
3. Logical structure by using linking words 
4. Variation in words (try to stay away from too, like, etc.

> Important: try not to use too many per. pronouns! Especially 'I'.


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Peer feedback
Round 4: grammar + vocab


Lots of mistakes in grammar and vocabulary > write them down

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Homework!
Rewrite the essay (writing task 4E) and submit it on Its Learning before the next class!
Page 1: original essay
Page 2: feedback
Page 3: rewritten/retyped essay
Vocabulary bank 6, page 139 > types of advertising, exercise 1 and 2. Consumerism: exercise 1 and 2

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Homework!
Rewrite the essay (writing task 5E) and submit it on Its Learning before the next class!
Page 1: original letter
Page 2: feedback
Page 3: rewritten/retyped letter

PS. between 250 - 300 words

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Leerdoelen
In groepje van 4/5 stel nu op basis van de essay + letter een aantal doelen samen.
Waar werken we naar toe en wat je moet kunnen?

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Thank you for paying attention!

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