Recap writing 3.0

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• mavo
• Leerjaar 4

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Planning for today

Lesson plan	5 min
The writing rubric, how to ace this test	15 min
Peer feedback	15 min
Get to work	until the end of the lesson

Homework:  Edit your letter according to the feedback you have received from your peer

The rubric 

What do teachers pay attention to? 

Peerfeedback 

1. We will make pairs. The teacher will deceide who is going with who 

2. Find the person you are placed with and have a seat

3. You are going to give each other feedback, you will use the rubric and decide what grade the other would get. 

4. On each others work you write at least:

1 thing that went well and 1 thing to improve

Your letters must be handed in next lesson 

If there are no tips & tops then you both haven't done your homework so take this seriously

Can't think of a tip? Ask for the opinion of at least 3 other pupils and then the teacher

Got feedback? 

Back to the drawing table and edit your work. The teacher wants to see the feedback you got and wether or not you improved your work according to the feedback given. 

Welcome guys! 

Please come in and have a seat

Welcome DG4!😁

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Planning for today

Lesson plan	5 min
Recap on letter writing	10 min
Signal words	15 min
Final touches	U.T.E.O.T.L

Homework: Add linking words to your letter where possible, hand this letter in. 

So far 

• You have learned the proper lay-out 
• You have practiced once
• You have seen the rubric and used it 
• You have received feedback from a peer

• What else do you need? 

Signal words 

Pros: 

• Add vocabulary points 
• Look great 
• Make you seem like you know what you are doing 
• Create links between sentences 

Signal words II

Linking words are important in all skills. 

They are little keys to understanding what is to follow 

VERY handy for reading, writing and speaking ;) 

Opsomming, uitbreiding

Tegenstelling

Oorzaak, redengevend

Voorbeeld

Also

In addition

Because

Since

Although

Rather

Instead

Yet

For example

For instance

i.e.

In fact

As

See the difference 

Orientation

Text:

- title: panda poop power

- image of a panda eating

- adapted from The Economist

1. In conclusion
2. Indeed
3. In the meantime
4. Nevertheless

1. an exclusive
2. an indispensable
3. a waste
4. a wholesome

1. abundance
2. diet
3. infertility
4. size

1. encouraging
2. hypothetical
3. pointless

Homework 

Attempt to put at least 3 linking words in your written letter

Hand in your letter to receive feedback from your teacher