Writing errors

I came across your study course where the lessons learnt from XXX are taught.
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In deze les zitten 16 slides, met interactieve quizzen en tekstslides.

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I came across your study course where the lessons learnt from XXX are taught.

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I'm writing you regarding Harvards online courses.

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I took a look on the website....

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I came across a class about XXX, which is teached by you.

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Even though the registration has already ended, I would still like to participate.

Well done! Be clear about why you are writing!

Slide 5 - Tekstslide

I'm very intrested in XXX and I'm always thinking about solutions to turn the tide.

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Slide 7 - Link

Replace the 'very.....' with a better word:
very interesting

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'very often'

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'very large'

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'very old'

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'very good'

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Tip:
Find stronger words to express yourself. However, make sure that particular word fits in the context of your letter. 

Avoid 'empty' words like 'very' and 'really'

Slide 13 - Tekstslide

Some Points to Remember:
  • Watch your tone  (don't be too direct)
  • Make paragraphs
  • Write clear and concise (to the point but polite!)
  • Closure: I look forward to hearing from you.
  • Know the difference: Yours faithfully, Yours sincerely

Slide 14 - Tekstslide

Of Course Booklet
Read pages 32 - 36 for more tips
and practise!
Do your homework in Goformative.com. You'll be editing your letter several times till it's perfect! 

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What do you need to work on?
Question yourself: 
Is it grammar, vocabulary, expressions, structure, etc.?
Do the work to fix it and ask questions!
'Writing' and an inquisitive mind are the best ways to learn how to write.

Slide 16 - Tekstslide