You will get to see a couple of examples of things that some pupils have written.
Tell me what do you think?
If you think it's correct: GREEN
If you think it isn't correct: RED
Slide 2 - Slide
Is this introduction correct?
Green or red?
If I had enough money for a house or to start a business, I would start a business.
Slide 3 - Slide
Is this introduction correct?
Green or red?
In this text I will try to explain why I disagre with the statement the most people say that having a lot of money doesn't make you happy.
Slide 4 - Slide
Do you understand the main point?
Green or red?
I will buy first a big house to make a business. So I can make money with this. First I contract some people so that I do not things on my own.
Besides I decorate this house so it looks nice than before. I think that people looks happier with decoration.
Slide 5 - Slide
Do you understand the main point?
Green or red?
Having a lot of money causes happiness cause you buy what you want to entertain yourself and not having to work. But you can't buy being sick.
Slide 6 - Slide
Are there any spelling mistakes?
Green or red?
To summrise my opinnion I disagree with the statement that money does't make people happy. Becaus if you you don't hava money you can't live.
Slide 7 - Slide
Is this a good ending?
Green or red?
What about the spelling?
To summarise my opinnion i think money can make you have so i disagree wit the statement. If you have money you can travel around the world you can eat what you want, you can drink what you want, you can do evereything but if you dosen't have money can't do all those thinks.
Lesson duration is: 80 min
