FCE Workshop: Writing a story

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This one will make you think! Who can be first person to guess what it is?

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It's a tea bag in a cup of tea. 

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Writing Exam:  FCE
FCE Writing (1 hour 20 minutes) Saturday the 12th of September

The writing paper is divided into two parts, you have to complete one task from each part. Each part carries equal points SO...... You should not spend longer on one than another. 
PART 1  Is compulsory and there is not choice of questions - You have to write an essay. You have to write 140- 190 words

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Writing - Part 2
Part 2 has three tasks to choose from which may include:
  • a letter or email
  • an article
  • a report
  • a review
  • a story

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Always make a STORY OUTLINE: a helpful way to do this is by underlining the most important aspects of the question. 
Now - Using your worksheet, underline the things you must consider
when you write your story. 

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Students should underline
We are looking for stories in our new English-language magazine for young people. 
Your story must begin with this sentence:
Tom got off the train and as the train left, he realized he was holding the wrong suitcase.
Your story must include:
• an address
• a surprise

Answer all points in the text:
  • First sentence has to be: Tom got off the train and as the train left, he realized he was holding the wrong suitcase.. 
  • Story must contain an address
  • Story must contain a suprise

Your story is being written for a magazine for young people so the tone should be informal and friendly.

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The incident in the photo took place after Tom left the station. What do think happened before and after the scene.
Work in pairs - discuss
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Put the steps for telling a good story in the correct order. 
a. Bring events to a conclusion
b. Relate/Describe the climax - the most exciting, dramatic part of the story.
c. Set the scene: introduce the character(s) and the background situation
d. Start building the tension
e. events leading to the end of the story

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Layout: Use three paragraphs
Title
Who, what, where, when
Story
Ending
Always, always make a plan.....
Leave a blank line between each of your paragraphs
Keep to the word count of 140-190 words

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Title
Who is Tom? 
What happened?
Why does he know he has the wrong suitcase? 
What was in it?
What address was on the suitcase?
What was the surprise

It is a good idea to think of the end of the story as you make your plan so that the story is logical. 

Make notes of your ideas and how the story will develop


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A good story should include the following: 
A good story should include the following: 
  • a paragraph that is interesting so that  you want to read on.
  • sentences that are varied in length for interest.
  • short sentences for dramatic events
  • a wide range of vocabulary, including vivid adjectives and adverbs.
  • a wide range of past tenses.
  • correct use of paragraphs
  • a range of connectors 

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Tips:
  • Use the past tense.
  • Be creative - Use your imagination
  • Be descriptive - make good use of adjectives and adverbs......

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He walked into the forest carrying the suitcase
He walked slowly into the cold, dark forest and realised that the old, leather suitcase was remarkably heavy

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Use direct speech





"Oh no! he screamed".  
"Don't move", he whispered

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delicious
disastrous
exhausted
heartbroken
marvellous
sad
bad
nice
good
tired

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Adverbs/Adverbial phrases of place and time go at the beginning or the end of a sentence. 
I ran over a cat yesterday
Last year I saved three dogs from a bear.

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Adverbs of manner usually go after the verb
The tortoise moved slowly down the beach 
She stroked the tiger carefully

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How to write a better story for FCE
  1. Read all the information in the question carefully, underlining key word and begin asking questions (who,where,  what, etc)
  2. Create a plan by answering your questions and using key words as bullet points > beginning- development-ending write one main idea for each
  3. Estimate the word count for each part (this will take practice) You can divide 180 by 3 so your average paragraph length is 60 words. 
  4. Write and adjust check you don't go much over 60 words per paragraph.
  5. Check for sense and flow once you have finished your draft, read it and of course check you have included the correct things. 

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You probably won't have time to write a draft: 
You may find that, even more than in other tasks, that you have to cross out not just words but whole sentences. This is not necessarily a problem, as long as it is readable – if it becomes difficult to follow, re-write the paragraph (corrector is not permitted, nor pencil – just dark blue or black pen).

If you find that you struggle for time, consider writing directly on the answer sheet as the examiners will not look at the rough paper at all and you will lose many marks if you leave a whole writing question unanswered.

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What are Cambridge looking for?
The Cambridge First for Schools Trainer give a checklist to follow after you have finished writing your story. It asks you if you have:

used a range of past tenses?
used descriptive adjectives and adverbs?
used a range to time words and expressions?
divided your story into paragraphs?
written 140-190 words?

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Remember,
you have 1 hour 20 minutes, so I recommend spending a max of 35 minutes on each task, which gives you 5 minutes to (re-)check through both tasks at the end. Some people think that the essay is more important and to allow more time for that. Everyone is differnt but because it is obligatory, the essay is usually where you get most practice, so it shouldn’t be necessary. As far as checking is concerned, this five minutes is really important to go back to the essay question, as it has been proven that if you leave a task and come back to it, you are more likely to find mistakes. So DON'T be tempted to use this time to transcribe your story (or other task) to the answer sheet.

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Extra help
Story writing: page 100 in Gold Experience and the Writing File on page 170

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