Passive - Creative Writing Revision

• Engels
• Middelbare school
• havo
• Leerjaar 3

Schedule

1. Passives - quiz
2. Revising your writing
3. Giving feedback 
4. TED
5. Exit-ticket

2 million people signed up and another 1.5 million were “interested".

1. active
2. passive

Seven people were arrested for trespassing.

1. active
2. passive

The last time the title was claimed by Messi.

1. active
2. passive

He was selected player of the year in England.

1. active
2. passive

Lionel Messi became champion last season with FC Barcelona and took bronze with Argentina on the Copa América.

1. active
2. passive

Area 51 was built in 1955 as a test area for the US government.

1. active
2. passive

Dylan Sprouse is known for his role as Cody Martin on the Disney Channel.

1. active
2. passive

She is on world tour right now in many countries.

1. active
2. passive

A mobile game can earn 40% of its revenue from microtransactions

1. active
2. passive

He was raised in Stratford.

1. active
2. passive

Make this sentence passive.
People claim that there are UFO’s there.

Make this sentence passive.
Raymond signed him.

Make this sentence passive.
They earn money with microtransactions.

Revise your work

I have sent all of you who handed in last week's writing assignment some feedback. Read through it, correct your mistakes and change your work where needed.

If you didn't send me anything, finish your writing and go through it yourself to spot potential mistakes. 

Done early? You can read in your book or study for Friday's formative test about the Present Simple vs Present Continuous.

How to give feedback

1. ALWAYS start out with something positive.
   What went well? What impressed you? What was exceptional?
2. DON'T outright say things were bad. Give some examples of what could have gone better. 
3. Give some tips/ideas as to what the other can do to improve.

Swap your revised work

Have a look at the other's work. When you're done give feedback on the following:

1. What went well?
2. What could have gone better?
3. What can the other do to improve?

Done early? You can start reading again or studying for the test.

How did it go?

TED

You are going to watch a TED-talk of about 10 minutes.

Answer the following questions:

What is the 1st kind of cyber attacker?

What is the 2nd kind of cyber attacker?

What is the 3rd kind of cyber attacker?

'I have nothing to hide', why is this not a valid argument?

Should we still be afraid of stuff like this now?

After the autumn break

Friday November 1st - Formative test about passives

It's already in Magister.

Write down what you take away from this lesson (what have you learned?).