formal email

• Engels
• MBO
• Studiejaar 3

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lesson aims: at the end of class

1. you know the 4 things to pay attention to when writing a formal email

2.  you are able to correctly compose a (formal) email.

2. you are able to correctly open and sign off a formal email.

3. you are able to express yourself more politely in writing by using "would like" and "could" .

How to write a formal email

Formal

informal

In een formele e-mail is het prima om afkortingen te gebruiken (bijv. I'm , I'll, can't..)

1. juist
2. onjuist

4 dingen om op te letten bij een formele mail

1. géén verkorte vormen: schrijf alles uit.

What is a correct way to start a formal email (you do not know who will receive the email)?

1. Dear Mister/M'am,
2. Dear sir/madam,
3. Dear Sir or Madam,
4. Dear Mr /Mrs

how do you sign off?

Formal

Dear Sir/Madam, 

Dear Ms Cooper,

Dear Mr Smith

Informal

Hi Josie,

Hello Adele,

Hi there Delilah,

Dear John,

Formal

when you do not no the recipient (ontvanger):

Yours faithfully

when you do know them:

Yours sincerely,

Never: greetings!

....

Informal

Love,

Bye,

See you soon, 

Kind regards... 

Never: greetings!

4 aandachtspunten

1. schrijf alles voluit: géén verkorte vormen.

2. let op een correcte aanhef en afsluiting

de 3 delen waaruit teksten zijn opgebouwd?

Text

a formal email contains:

Dear ....

Introduction ( reason for writing)

body (content/inhoud)

conclusion 

signing off

4 aandachtspunten 

1. geen verkorte vormen: schrijf alles uit

2. let op een correcte aanhef en afsluiting

3. Verdeel je tekst duidelijk in een inleiding, middenstuk en slot.

Dear Mr Smith

I have read the add in the paper. I want to be a part of your sales team. Can you send me more details?

Thanks,

Harry de Vries

Be polite

Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing with regard to your add. I would very much like to join your sales team. Could you please provide me with more information?

I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

H. de Vries

so:

Can you send me a picture? 

I want to go to France.

Do you want some coffee?

4 aandachtspunten 

1. geen verkorte vormen: schrijf alles voluit

2. zorg voor een correcte aanhef en afsluiting

3. verdeel de tekst in een duidelijke inleiding, middenstuk en slot

4. wees beleefd!

If you start an email with Dear Sir/Madam, how do you end?

1. Greetings
2. Yours faithfully
3. Yours sincerely
4. Best wishes

The sentence: I'm sorry, but I won't be able to attend the meeting. is best used

1. In the introduction of a formal mail
2. in the body of a formal mail
3. in the conclusion of a formal mail
4. not at all

polite form of
I want to come visit you tomorrow

de 4 aandachtspunten van de formele email

Check LA- Write an E=mail

Find an IT company online (preferably English but a Dutch company is fine too as long as you write your mail in English!)
Find out as much as you can about how green this company is.
Compose an e-mail to this company and include the following:
Who you are
Why you are writing this e-mail, (school assignment, research.)
Ask them how "Green" they are
Ask them if they will reply back

Next week

Blog or Speaking

Getting ready for debate.

Next Monday

First think about a solution on your own. What would you do with al the hardware that needs to be recycled. How can you make a company green. What needs to be done, what do you need to consider.
Form a group, let the teacher know who is in your group (2 - 4 students).
With this group you will choose 1 solution which you think is best. Make notes.

Hand in:

 A document with the following
Your IT Problem.
Your individual solution.
Your group solution and notes how you came to this solution. Brainstorm!
How you can implement this solution
What do you need to consider to implement this solution